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Please tell me you'll fight this fight for me?
I need you to help me
I've realized now
I won't do this on my own
If you fall I'll fall with you
I'm that crazy bridge-jumping girl people should have warned you about
Now it's too late though
I reach out a hand
Asking you for this last favor
Will you help me up?
Will you keep on breathing with me?
... just tell me what you think, okay? :)
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ladijayne Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student General Artist
I actually really like it.. I like the.. neediness of it? The fact that she is being blatantly obvious.. and declaring her love.. I don't know, the whole piece just works for me.
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to hear that. :hug:
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Writer
It's a wonderful question to ask ><
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I hope it helps, if so only a little bit ^^
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Writer
Same here.
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Writer
:huggle:
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DemonisAOH Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm, very nice ^_^
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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DemonisAOH Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^_^
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:icondemonisaoh:
DemonisAOH Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconleonar-cousland:
Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
:iconsadplz:
WONDERFUL!!!
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :tighthug:
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:iconleonar-cousland:
Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
:iconnoproblemplz:
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Leonar-Cousland Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
:icongrin--plz:
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:iconpain--addict:
PAIN--addict Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wOw!! lovely!! :heart:
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you very much! :D :heart:
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PAIN--addict Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no probs! :iconkissmote:
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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fenicksreborn Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student Writer
Very good visuals! I really like it. :)
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :glomp:
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fenicksreborn Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :)
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:iconsarastallet99:
sarastallet99 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Du har en massa kommentarer nu!! :d
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ja vet!! :D
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SillyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Räcker ut handen.* Japp :3 <3
Den var bra :) <3
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aaaw, hallonpaj :3 :heart:
Tack! :D
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:iconsillythewolf:
SillyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ostfié :3
Varse^^
P.S Du duschar nu. D.S
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
x3
P.s You're a little bit scary. D.s
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:iconsillythewolf:
SillyTheWolf Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Jag vet :3
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xP
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Lauelibre Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:-) love it
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :D
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xOscarFloresx2 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is amazing :D
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
i think its gorgeous!
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :love:
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atlantic-lungs Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Writer
Of course :hug:
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:iconaifos96:
Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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