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Please tell me you'll fight this fight for me?
I need you to help me
I've realized now
I won't do this on my own
If you fall I'll fall with you
I'm that crazy bridge-jumping girl people should have warned you about
Now it's too late though
I reach out a hand
Asking you for this last favor
Will you help me up?
Will you keep on breathing with me?
... just tell me what you think, okay? :)
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ladijayne Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student General Artist
I actually really like it.. I like the.. neediness of it? The fact that she is being blatantly obvious.. and declaring her love.. I don't know, the whole piece just works for me.
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad to hear that. :hug:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Writer
It's a wonderful question to ask ><
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I hope it helps, if so only a little bit ^^
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Writer
Same here.
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Writer
:huggle:
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DemonisAOH Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm, very nice ^_^
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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DemonisAOH Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome ^_^
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