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Baby...
May I ask you something?

If I...
If I told you of my secrets, my worries
wouldn't you listen, wouldn't you help me?
If I...
If I hugged you tight and never wanted to let go
would you seriously look at me with disgrace?
If I...                                                                                                                           
If I kissed you
would you really push me away?
If I...
If I asked you to be mine
and mine only
Would you have the urge to say no?
If I...
If I told you I love you
Would you be able to look me in the eyes
and tell me
you don't love me too?

What if I don't think so?
What then, am I supposed to do?
What if I strongly believe you feel this flame?
What if I think this all is nothing but a game?
What if I see through your act?
What if I see that we're all just a little cracked?
Don't feel shame though.
I'm here and I will not bow.
A poem I wrote a while back and now feel emotionally ready to post :XD:

I actually kinda like it hope you do to :) Please tell me either way :thanks:

As usual, I wont really explain the poem, it speaks for itself, but yes, I almost only write from personal experiences.

Thank you :hug:
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fairietaleluver Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
I really liked this poem : )
Loved how you exaggerated the hesitation in the questions.
Well written :D
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :glomp:
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pain-kun Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
this is really good great job i love it
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you! :hug:
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pain-kun Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Anytime ^^
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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pain-kun Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Best one I have ever seen
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Again, thank you! :)
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whooo, I know the feeling!!!
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Aifos96 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, ehm, congrats? x)
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