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Blood on the dancefloor!

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Bodies moving
Lights flashing
"Sorry I can't hear you darling
The music is too loud"
One drink
Two drinks
Soon I wont see you either honey
The silence my phone speak is killing me
piece by piece
Guys staring
Too bad boys
My heart is already taken
A dress tied up too tight
a heart slowly breaking into a million pieces
Someone must save me now
Something is cracking
Something is falling apart
Someone must take me away from here now
come on, take me by the hand
Oh what the hell
skip the sappy talk
just take the lead
and lead me out of this god forsaken house
Save me
Save me from myself
Save me from the cracking sound
It makes echos in my head
If you can save me only for that brief moment
Then let so be
let me escape that moment
But baby hurry up now please
I hear the heart breaking
It's scary as hell, can't you hear it?
If you wait now it'll all be too late
Bodies moving
Light's flashing
I can hear a heart cracking
Oh dear
I think the heart is mine!
just don't ask about the title, I know the poem has nothing to do with blood, I thought of adding that 'cause I really like that title, but what the hell, I think you'll survive xP

This a different little thing that popped into my mind and I've changed it many times, still not quite satisfied with it but I guess it's alright^^

What do you think? :hug:
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Non-of-your-busines's avatar
Förvänade ig att den slkulle rimma mycket så fort jag läste den :P
Nice work